28/03/11 - Great use of photos here Oliver. I like how your instructions are so clear. Well done

Monday 28th march

LI:Write an instructing procedure about the rules and what to do at a marae

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08/03/11. It is a shame that you did not take a screen shot of your work! At least we can see the pictures you used up on the wall.

Monday 7th March

LI: I am learning to instruct the reader in words (procedural writing)
How to make a flax puti puti

Materials :1 Flax

1.Get your piece of flax.

2.Grab your flax and split it down halfway from the end and split it again until you have 4 pieces of the flax.

1. fold the outer piece of flax over the 2nd pice of flax and do the same with the 2nd and 3rd.

4.While weaving fold it around the outer piece.

5.Keep doing this until you have only about 17cm left.

6.Then tie the ends into a knot. By Sam Oliver Dylan

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